R ecently, someone asked me about joining two independent clauses to make a compound sentence. She thought such a sentence would need a comma, but she often found them missing. Today, we’ll review how to join independent clauses.
First, a couple of definitions. A clause is a part of a sentence that contains a subject and a verb; it may or may not contain other words. An independent clause can stand as a sentence on its own because it contains a complete thought:
Alternatively, a dependent clause does not contain a complete thought and can’t stand on its own:
A compound sentence is two or more independent clauses (sentences) joined together:
President Obama and Korean President Lee failed to reach agreement on the Korean Free Trade Agreement (FTA) before a joint press conference in Seoul Thursday, but both leaders said the two sides will continue to work towards a final consensus in the near future.
What punctuation do you use between two independent clauses? You have a few options, depending on what parts of speech you use to join the sentences.
Swift action saves a man’s life, but paramedics fear the electric-shock victim may have suffered internal burns to organs.
We expect average subscription prices to stay around current levels in the near term; however, if promotional activities continue longer than expected or new content agreements adversely impact Dish, this could lower our price estimate of $25.84.
Note, however, that if you use therefore or thus and you don’t need to emphasize the following clause, you can drop the comma:
The plane took off late due to poor weather conditions; thus we arrived late.
After 45 days of no rain, the farmers were worried about their crops; indeed, it was all they thought about.
In The Copyeditor’s Handbook, Amy Einsohn succinctly lays out the rules (IND stands for independent clause):
IND, coordinate conjunction IND.
IND; adverb [,] IND.
IND; transitional expression, IND.
IND; IND. or IND: IND. or IND–IND.
For a deeper explanation and more examples, check out pages 78-79 of Einsohn’s book.
Do you have more questions on joining clauses? Email me or leave a comment below.
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